Okay so I entered a local contest here in town, winner gets published in a magizine or something so I figured why not. Ive been workin on this for a couple of days, It's a long ways from through but I figured i'd come to you guys for opinons on what I should work on/change...here ya go

Oh and the car wasn't my choice, It was provided so don't pick on the car

Orginal


Mine

 

That's pretty bad A, dude. I think it might help if you could tint the windows a littlt more...Don't know it that's possible, just an idea...you could put some decals on the bottom front of the rear fender and bottom of the door to make it look a little more riced out and racey...
One day I will take my time to figure out how to do this. Until then, keep posting your creations to get my motivation up.

 

I've always liked your work Huck. Keep us informed, and I hope you get it.

 

Huck....I assume that this contest is supposed to show off your skills?....if that is the case....then I know you have better tuned skills then what you are portraying in your current rendition.......Since they did provide you with a ricer (sorry....I had to pick on the car).....you might as well add more "ricer" effects such as a bigger fin, graphics and "mod stickers"......and.....you should photochop a hottie on the hood (you dont have to submit the hottie version to the magazine....but at least share it with us).....

....other than that....looks like you are heading in the right direction....

 

Not knowing much about ricers isn't it sitting a little low to perform tricks like say turning?

The color work looks great but I think the drop looks a little artificial, than again maybe thats how they really look.

 

I agree with Wiffleball. You're being too subtle.

 

Wiffleball....how cute....did you come up with that all by yourself?....

 

I liked it. Good one UC.

 

To really show off your talents, you need to swap out the wing, add a scoop to the hood or grill area, tint the windows darker, or a different color, maybe add some type of side scoop for brake cooling, and a vent on the fender for cooling engine compartment. The hottie idea is a good one, only because it would show your talent. I agree, do two, one for the mag and one for us.

good luck.

 

Cool so I should go all out with the ricer effect...I think I can manage to do that. Ill keep yall informed thx for the help

 

imurhuklbery

Can you email me? I have a job for you.

 

Wuts up?

 

Update...Tinted windows more, Carbon fiber hood, Alpine sticker, And choped the roof a little. More Tomorrow

Again suggestion welcome and wanted


P.S. Hottie on Hood To Come Soon
P.S.S. Sorry For The Size 56k Ppl....(Tip)GET BROADBAND DAMNIT

 

You're still too subtle man. Go for the gold.

 

Damn...Im not very good at this whole ricer deal